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My story has a group of five refugees traveling across the kingdom. One of them is preachy and pretty much useless (unused to physical labor, trying to convert the heathens in the group). She's dri...
#4: Attribution notice removed
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System
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2019-12-14T20:45:27Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T11:04:34Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/42763 License name: CC BY-SA 3.0 License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision
My story has a group of five refugees traveling across the kingdom. One of them is preachy and pretty much useless (unused to physical labor, trying to convert the heathens in the group). She's driving three of the others (including the MC) completely crazy. How can I show that she's turning the other characters into giant flaming fireballs without annoying the reader as well? I'm assuming I should keep her dialogue to a minimum...
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2019-02-28T19:45:44Z (over 5 years ago)
Original score: 4