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Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/a/42778
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Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/a/42778
License name: CC BY-SA 3.0
License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/

## Fantasy racism is normal

In my experience of fantasy works as well as in my own writing racism does exist between the various races. Tolkien's Elves and Dwarves are the most obvious example. Dwarfs and Orcs in D&D lore traditionally don't get along.

### Have reasons for racism

Usually the reason for this is some past slight rather than inherit bigotry. See [Why don't Elves like Dwarves?](https://scifi.stackexchange.com/questions/20940/why-dont-elves-like-dwarves) for the Tolkien lore. In my world a long and bloody war between Dwarfs and Orcs is the reason for mutual hatred.

If you can link the behaviour to an in universe reason readers are less likely to draw a parallel to real world racism.

### Avoid real world terms or scenarios

Try to avoid using referring to other races or group with the same terminology that is used in the real world. Make sure your research an derogatory terms you use and understand their connotations before including them.

You should also avoid behaviours or actions similar to real world situations. Segmented bathrooms or schools will always be seen as a parallel. As will racially biased law enforcement. Educate yourself on what the pain points in racial discrimination are, and avoid reflecting these in your work.

### Get feedback from multiple ethic groups

This it possibly the most important point. As a member of one race I can only give you advice from my perspective. While I may not find parallels to real world racism in your book, members of other ethic groups may. Try to diversify your test readers as much as possible. If you intend to send the work internationally or put it online get feedback from the countries it will available in. Racism looks different in different places and you should be prepared for that.

### Add a disclaimer

> This is a work of pure fiction set in a fantasy world. Any parallels to real world cultural groups or events are unintentional. The author respects all races equally.

Adding this sort of message to the appendix of your work is never a bad idea. It won't stop people from making them, but should reduce the backlash if you do make a mistake.

Original score: 5