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If you think there is too much exposition, there probably is. Then again, even if you don't think so, the reader may. The fact that you are questioning is the important part. Asking these questi...
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#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T01:41:02Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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Joel Shea
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2019-12-08T01:41:02Z (almost 5 years ago)
If you think there is too much exposition, there probably is. Then again, even if you don't think so, the reader may. The fact that you are questioning is the important part. Asking these questions forces you to make choices. Making decisions (and sticking to them) is a crucial part of the process. I would say that pretty much anything can be interesting if made interesting. It's a cliché, but make sure you are showing, not telling. If you are immersing the reader in your world by showing them what happened (as opposed to giving them a list of events), you have a much better chance of keeping the reader's interest. Don't give them exposition, show them the events.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2011-06-10T09:15:34Z (over 13 years ago)
Original score: 6