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I don't think you should leave the twist out, though it might be a little too soon to incorporate twist. You also should not make it clear from the beginning that the hero is corrupt, instead showi...
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#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T11:13:18Z (about 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/a/43168 License name: CC BY-SA 3.0 License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision
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Xilpex
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2019-12-08T11:13:18Z (about 5 years ago)
I don't think you should leave the twist out, though it might be a little too soon to incorporate twist. You also should not make it clear from the beginning that the hero is corrupt, instead showing it little by little.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2019-03-08T04:45:02Z (almost 6 years ago)
Original score: 0