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If your givens aren't working, change your givens. If Vampirella McExplosia is dominating every scene she's in, then she's too big for this story. Save this draft (so you aren't putting a stake in...
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#4: Attribution notice removed
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System
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2019-12-13T12:00:47Z (about 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/a/43186 License name: CC BY-SA 3.0 License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T11:13:44Z (about 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/a/43186 License name: CC BY-SA 3.0 License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision
If your givens aren't working, change your givens. If Vampirella McExplosia is dominating every scene she's in, then she's too big for this story. Save this draft (so you aren't putting a stake in her, just moving her) and rewrite your story entirely with someone else as Roommate #4. You will have to change plot points, and probably the entire main conflict of the story, but it will solve your problem. She's a great character who's the wrong fit for this work. See also [My cool character is doing nothing for the plot. How do I deal with him?](https://writing.stackexchange.com/questions/5705/my-cool-character-is-doing-nothing-for-the-plot-how-do-i-deal-with-him)
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2019-03-08T10:46:46Z (almost 6 years ago)
Original score: 32