What is the structure of a paranormal horror story?
Building on the definition of a Paranormal Story (as opposed to Dark Fantasy) described in the answers here: What are most common tropes of a paranormal book and dark fantasy book?.
A paranormal story is about a phenomenon that cannot be explained in-world. It defies natural laws, probably logic and common sense, too. Borrowing a rule from the link, a story with an incidental paranormal element isn't a story about a paranormal element.
I don't want to be too narrow on defining what counts as paranormal. The genre is Horror so inclusive of traditional ghost stories, elements which are left intentionally ambiguous, and stories that evoke the supernatural even if it is rationally or psychologically explained.
The Paranormal Story can be a subplot or smaller section of a larger story. The question is about how to structure just the paranormal parts of the narrative, in practical terms, they way they might be plotted as story beats on a timeline.
What is the structure of a Paranormal Story?
I was only able to think of 2 paranormal story structures:
Evidence of the paranormal – the phenomenon is incrementally introduced, allowing characters to discover, debate, and rationally reject each in turn. Circumstantial evidence and unreliable testimony build, creating conflict and division among the characters – or self-doubt in a single character. The inevitable climax is a confrontation or direct encounter with the paranormal, which resolves the conflict – either the supernatural is confirmed as true, it is rationally explained through a plot twist, or ambiguity is preserved.
Descent and return – when the phenomenon is unambiguous, it's presented as a dark mirror or alternate reality to the normal world, with a threshold or barrier which can be circumvented, fails, or acts as a portal. The protagonist intentionally or accidentally descends into the paranormal world which becomes stranger and more threatening the deeper they go. The conflict is about navigating back to the normal world, or the consequences of bringing back a compromised object or entity which should not exist in the normal world.
I am able to think of many other structures for horror stories in general, and this feels broadly adaptable to co-exist with other horror themes, but when I thought critically about what keeps a paranormal story about the paranormal – as opposed to transitioning into a monster chase or some other type of horror story – these were the only ones I could think of.
Are there others?
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In paranormal stories you first need to establish normality. Make sure that you note down the elements that you have presented as the cardinal staples of normality. You then need to break them, one by one. The order in important. You first break the elements of normality that could be explained by the laws of normality itself as a temporary altered state, or as an unlikely coincidence. Then you can introduce bigger changes until you defy even the laws of physics.
For instance:
introduce a group of students going to school on a schoolbus on a sunny day.
the schoolbus breaks down. The engine won't start. This could just be a normal event.
sudden gusts of wind lift a cloud of dust along the road. Unlikely, but still possible.
animals start appearing at the edge of the road, and they stare, unafraid, at the kids in the bus. Strange, but perhaps there is a not-so-obvious explanation.
black mud starts dripping from the ceiling of the bus. Extremely strange, no satisfying reason can be provided.
the bus is lifted in the air and starts flying. Open defiance of the laws of physics.
With each step, you also need to provide a voice that denies the possibility that these events are paranormal. This is the voice that the reader needs to cling to. It provides a step-by-step transition into the harder-to-believe scenes without immediately dropping the suspension of disbelief. In the example above, I added this voice in italic.
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It seems to me many paranormal stories (like possession, or demons on Earth) just begin with the paranormal, period. In The Exorcist a child is possessed and must be cured.
In The Omen, Damien (the child) is the son of Satan and the Antichrist.
To me most paranormal stories begin very early with a pre-existing paranormal thing and the protagonist is already aware of the paranormal, isn't surprised, doesn't need to "learn" about it, but is an expert that seeks to solve the problem and dispel the paranormal.
Even in Stephen King's Firestarter, the father knows from the beginning what his kid can do, and is fighting to protect her.
Those don't sound like either of your two scenarios.
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