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I created this question for two reasons: I want to know if it is proper to place a comma after the word and (in bold) below. This sentence is kind of clunky, like many of my sentences, and it hel...
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T01:42:20Z (over 4 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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Brian Dant
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2019-12-08T01:42:20Z (over 4 years ago)
I created this question for two reasons: 1. I want to know if it is proper to place a comma after the word _and_ (in bold) below. 2. This sentence is kind of clunky, like many of my sentences, and it helps if more advanced writers chop it up and express it in a more clear format. Please offer me your re-written sentence, and tell me why you changed it. > 124 delegates from 12 countries attended the Symposium and were met with multiple workshops and speeches, here are a few: Scaling Conservation Ag to Confront the Upcoming Famine; Permaculture: A tool for self-reliance; **and,** Opportunities & Challenges for Reversing Soil Fertility Depletion and Increasing Crop Productivity.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2011-06-18T20:02:13Z (almost 13 years ago)
Original score: 1