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Q&A How to keep a dark protagonist who wants to keep his humanity dark?

My MC is in a dark line of work. He is an assassin. He is also someone with lines he does not cross. He has been duped or coerced to do things he would not, but still holds to some standards. I wa...

4 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Rasdashan‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T11:35:57Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/44267
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#2: Initial revision by user avatar Rasdashan‭ · 2019-12-08T11:35:57Z (almost 5 years ago)
My MC is in a dark line of work. He is an assassin. He is also someone with lines he does not cross. He has been duped or coerced to do things he would not, but still holds to some standards.

I want my gentleman assassin to be dark, conflicted and dangerous without being mad dog killer, psycho or (worse yet) fading into emo guy who kills.

He would tell you that his own innocence was the first casualty of his profession. When on the job, he is a pure professional. When off the clock, he is a normal person - more or less.

How best to keep him the assassin next door and avoid becoming emo guy who kills?

MC considers himself a necessary evil, does not enjoy taking lives, but feels that using his skills is better than John Q Public efforts causing suffering. He has an extensive military background even before his CIA days. He never intended to become an assassin.

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2019-04-01T21:57:00Z (over 5 years ago)
Original score: 10