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Q&A Vague vs Specific: When to provide motivation details for action in a story?

I'm reading Wired for Story, by Lisa Cron, where she writes the following about being vague or omitting information that the reader does not know: ...being vague is never a good idea... .....

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by iamtowrite‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

Question novel fiction style
#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T11:37:43Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/44336
License name: CC BY-SA 3.0
License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision by user avatar iamtowrite‭ · 2019-12-08T11:37:43Z (almost 5 years ago)
I'm reading [Wired for Story](https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/13126099-wired-for-story), by Lisa Cron, where she writes the following about being vague or omitting information that the reader does not know:

> ...being vague is never a good idea...
> 
> ...Like most things, it can start off so promisingly: “Holly ducked into the alley, glad to have avoided Sam for the millionth time.” Sounds great, right? Trouble is, unless we know at that moment in the story why Holly has been avoiding Sam, it will fall flat.
> 
> _Cron, Lisa. Wired for Story (p. 112). Potter/Ten Speed/Harmony/Rodale. Kindle Edition._

Is her thesis about _vague vs. specific_ valid at all times? Based on her example above, what if the author intends to reveal why Holly is avoiding Sam later on? For instance, later on, we find that Holly has stolen Sam's collectible lunch box.

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2019-04-03T19:04:47Z (over 5 years ago)
Original score: 2