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I suggest breaking the story into smaller scenes which you approach individually one at a time. Make each scene a connection between the characters that grows slowly over time, each scene bringing ...
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System
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2019-12-08T11:37:58Z (over 4 years ago)
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GGx - Reinstate Monica Cellio
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2019-12-08T11:37:58Z (over 4 years ago)
I suggest breaking the story into **smaller scenes which you approach individually** one at a time. Make each scene a connection between the characters that grows slowly over time, **each scene bringing them that little bit closer.** Perhaps, at first, they are invited to the same party but refuse to speak to each other. Then something happens, an external event, that forces them to say **just a few words.** Later, when they see each other again, **the ice is broken.** They are able to say a little more to each other, perhaps another event forces them to talk about what happened at the party. On and on you go, each encounter, **each external force, motivating them to come a little closer.** That way, you keep the flow and it's not jarring, but believable. > One of my favourite examples of two characters coming together in spite of the odds against them is _Eleanor Oliphant is Completely Fine_. It's a fantastic example of character development and motivation. Good luck!
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2019-04-04T13:46:31Z (about 5 years ago)
Original score: 2