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Q&A Punctuating text messages with speaker tags in running copy

Punctuation (and spelling and capitalization) in text messages is different from punctuation in other forms of written communication (emails, memos, standard prose). In particular, punctuation, o...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Lauren Ipsum‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

#4: Attribution notice removed by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-13T12:00:47Z (over 4 years ago)
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#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T11:40:10Z (over 4 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision by (deleted user) · 2019-12-08T11:40:10Z (over 4 years ago)
Punctuation (and spelling and capitalization) in text messages is different from punctuation in other forms of written communication (emails, memos, standard prose).

In particular, punctuation, or sometimes the lack of it, in text messaging adds layers of meaning. Texts can be close to a live transcript of speech, so more characters are needed to replicate the rhythms and tones of speech.

For example:

Person A texts Person B, saying:

> _do you want to get dinner tonight at that new Thai place which just opened?_

If Person B responds

> _we could do that_

it means something _different_ from

> _we could do that._

The closing period in a text can add a negative nuance: a downward tone, a reluctance. (An exclamation point would mean excitement, as is more typical.)

So here's my question: Let's say I'm including texting in my story. Let's also say that I don't have access to many different kinds of formatting (like the block text here on SE).

If I'm writing most kinds of dialogue, and I have speaker tags, I use a comma to connect the dialogue and the tag:

> "We could do that," she answered.

But if I'm trying to show a text message, I want to indicate that there's no closing punctuation:

> _we could do that_ she answered.

and dang, that looks dreadful.

Putting the speaker tag in front means it looks like I forgot to end the sentence:

> She answered _we could do that_

And you do _need_ tags occasionally so the reader knows who is texting.

How do I address this punctuation collision?

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2019-04-08T20:03:49Z (about 5 years ago)
Original score: 3