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I use a double-dash, and specifically a double-dash (not an em dash), on both sides of the interruption. The demon -- he? she? -- gestured toward the supply wagons. Although in your example, ...
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2019-12-19T22:13:45Z (almost 5 years ago)
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2019-12-08T11:41:38Z (almost 5 years ago)
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I use a double-dash, and specifically a double-dash (not an em dash), on both sides of the interruption. > The demon -- he? she? -- gestured toward the supply wagons. Although in your example, the interruption doesn't make sense; it would not make sense to say "The demon she gestured toward the supply wagons."
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2019-04-11T18:12:17Z (over 5 years ago)
Original score: 5