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You cannot randomly change POV in the middle of a paragraph just to get in that one critical snipe at your main character. You can have a scene break (usually two returns, to create white space) ...
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#4: Attribution notice removed
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2019-12-13T12:00:48Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#3: Attribution notice added
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2019-12-08T11:54:00Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/a/45199 License name: CC BY-SA 3.0 License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision
You cannot randomly change POV in the middle of a paragraph just to get in that one critical snipe at your main character. You _can_ have a scene break (usually two returns, to create white space) and move to the POV of other characters, like the men in the truck or two other characters discussing your main character. It's actually better if you do this more than once so it doesn't look like a mistake.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2019-05-16T09:57:46Z (over 5 years ago)
Original score: 4