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You want to immerse your reader in the story hence writing "hahaha" does not give a vivid definition of how the character felt whilst laughing.People read stories to get lost in the moment and feel...
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#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T11:55:29Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/a/45295 License name: CC BY-SA 3.0 License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision
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lois botwe
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2019-12-08T11:55:29Z (almost 5 years ago)
You want to immerse your reader in the story hence writing "hahaha" does not give a vivid definition of how the character felt whilst laughing.People read stories to get lost in the moment and feel like they are actually there ,so its the job of the writer to make it so. \*micheal burst out in fits of laughter clutching onto the chair for support. "That..was..so..funny " he said between laughs. \* this gives the reader a vivid picture of the story as compared to a simple "hahaha"(which can also be interpreted as sarcasm).
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2019-05-20T21:31:56Z (over 5 years ago)
Original score: 1