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Q&A How to deceive the MC

+1 colmde. I'd say you can just be careful with your wording, so technically you did not lie to the reader. Don't have the narrator call him "the boss". I will add an example: The fat man liste...

posted 5y ago by Amadeus‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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#2: Initial revision by (deleted user) · 2019-12-08T11:55:58Z (almost 5 years ago)
+1 colmde. I'd say you can just be careful with your wording, so technically you did not lie to the reader. Don't have the narrator call him "the boss". I will add an example:

> The fat man listened to the piece in his ear, then said, "The boss will be here in a minute. Show some respect."
> 
> MC said nothing, he just took his seat. A gray-haired man entered; MC noted not a hair out of place, manicured, his suit and shoes looked tailored and expensive.
> 
> The fat man said, "Boss," and lowered his eyes.
> 
> _Finally,_ thought the MC. _This is the man to kill._
> 
> The gray-haired man took his seat. "Alright. Here I am. You got three minutes to tell me why I shouldn't tell Bobby here to bag your head and shoot it. Will you do that for me, Bobby?"
> 
> The fat man said, "Yes sir. Three minutes."
> 
> "Good man. Wait until I tell you." He turned to meet MC's eyes. Not a blink. Completely relaxed and expressionless, a psychopath in waiting.

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2019-05-20T14:20:22Z (over 5 years ago)
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