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Q&A How to make the POV character sit on the sidelines without the reader getting bored

My POV character has been seriously injured and is bedridden for three months. But life stops for no one. In fact, a major epic battle is brewing and to delay it would be unrealistic. If anything,...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Caspian‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T12:01:22Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/45521
License name: CC BY-SA 3.0
License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision by user avatar Caspian‭ · 2019-12-08T12:01:22Z (almost 5 years ago)
My POV character has been seriously injured and is bedridden for three months.

But life stops for no one. In fact, a major epic battle is brewing and to delay it would be unrealistic. If anything, the enemy would surely seek to strike while the hero has been forced onto the sidelines.

I've already written the huge battle... and it's epic. But I can't figure out that to do with it.

Do I delete the scene and replace it with how the POV character hears the news after the fact? But three months of doing nothing is really boring.

Or, do I keep the scene but switch to a new POV character for just one scene? (Would it be confusing to have a secondary POV character for only one scene?)

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2019-05-28T19:47:20Z (over 5 years ago)
Original score: 10