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I wrote a scene that I put my heart and soul into. It was received well by most of my readers, but I'm struggling with crafting a new scene for a book I'm currently writing. Here's some comments fr...
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T12:02:38Z (about 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/45596 License name: CC BY-SA 3.0 License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision
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Dawn Kelli
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2019-12-08T12:02:38Z (about 5 years ago)
I wrote a scene that I put my heart and soul into. It was received well by most of my readers, but I'm struggling with crafting a new scene for a book I'm currently writing. Here's some comments from my beta readers on the first scene in which I was able to captivate my audience: > "OMG I love how you set the mood!" "Love it! The details and it was so graphic, made me feel like I was there. I had to stop reading for a minute because I felt like I was there," "Beautifully written" I want to be able to do this again in my new book, but I'm finding it so difficult. How can I get back to that place?
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2019-05-30T23:16:24Z (over 5 years ago)
Original score: 17