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Write from the POV of the monster. This way the prey can be described in more dismissive terms. You can then add inner thoughts of the monster. Dismissive thoughts about how this one does what they...
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System
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2019-12-08T12:07:23Z (about 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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AGirlHasNoName
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2019-12-08T12:07:23Z (about 5 years ago)
Write from the POV of the monster. This way the _prey_ can be described in more dismissive terms. You can then add inner thoughts of the monster. Dismissive thoughts about how this one does what they all do. First they get scared and their blood makes them easier to find. Then they run, and tire themselves out. Next they die. Hey wait, where did that thumping heartbeat go and why are her eyes glowing?
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System
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2019-06-05T13:06:55Z (over 5 years ago)
Original score: 17