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There are so many good answers here. The scenario you are trying to figure out is really a key point to the readers and jealous here makes it even more difficult for author to explain this scene. M...
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#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T12:09:22Z (over 4 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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Gouri Shankar Karanam
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2019-12-08T12:09:22Z (over 4 years ago)
There are so many good answers here. The scenario you are trying to figure out is really a key point to the readers and jealous here makes it even more difficult for author to explain this scene. Myself, I thought of a line which may help you. The main character says: "Seems like I have to take the responsibility of protecting you like a treasure from the rest of beauties" or something similar. It is like saying that he is her's treasure and she feels jealous and anxiety whenever someone tries to steal him. I don't think it is excessive as possessive. It also depends on how the other character takes that. I will be great if you explain his feelings too, for justification of the main character's worries. I find it as a cute way to express jealous, Thanks.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2019-06-10T13:25:48Z (almost 5 years ago)
Original score: 1