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I am writing a short story that describes a dream that I had as a child. I wrote a first rough draft and had my girlfriend read it to give me some feedback. One thing she criticized is my writing s...
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System
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2019-12-08T12:09:56Z (over 4 years ago)
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user3661841
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2019-12-08T12:09:56Z (over 4 years ago)
I am writing a short story that describes a dream that I had as a child. I wrote a first rough draft and had my girlfriend read it to give me some feedback. One thing she criticized is my writing style, saying that I type too formally, which she said felt out of place for the events in the story. The story is in the first person with the dream being described as if I were telling it to people sitting by a campfire. I know that there is no right or wrong way, but just for the sake of being engaging, should I change how I write or continue the way I feel comfortable?
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2019-06-10T21:29:07Z (almost 5 years ago)
Original score: 11