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I’m currently writing a story and one of my characters is a butterfly. In one of the scenes, she manages to run away from a bunch of hungry lizards and hides into a flower; let’s say a Zinnia. Wh...
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System
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2019-12-08T12:10:36Z (about 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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vanity
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2019-12-08T12:10:36Z (about 5 years ago)
I’m currently writing a story and one of my characters is a butterfly. In one of the scenes, she manages to run away from a bunch of hungry lizards and hides into a flower; let’s say a Zinnia. When describing the scene I wrote: > “……she dived into the Zinnia’s head and hastily rolled into the pollen….” But then, I found that the expression “flower head” means: “A dense, compact cluster of small flowers that appear to be a single flower, as of a dandelion or clover.” Thus, I changed the word to: > “…she dived into the Zinnia’s heart and hastily rolled into the pollen….” Would it be correct? [](https://i.stack.imgur.com/SGn4F.jpg)
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2019-06-12T14:22:34Z (over 5 years ago)
Original score: 5