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My mc poses some strange shadow powers which he tries to hide and in one quest he met his enemy who also has these powers. They both end up fighting each other and the mc slows her down and escapes...
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fantasy
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System
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2019-12-08T12:13:34Z (about 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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touka chan
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2019-12-08T12:13:34Z (about 5 years ago)
My mc poses some strange shadow powers which he tries to hide and in one quest he met his enemy who also has these powers. They both end up fighting each other and the mc slows her down and escapes from there. Then he realizes that they both were in the same city working in the same place so they end up fighting again and also the enemy is a childlike, funny person who masks her deepest feeling (sadness and isolation) and she hides this personality and always be angry towards mc (only to mc). How can I make them both fall in love or attest mc fall in love with her or at least his enemy fall in love with him without making the readers bored and also to avoid cliches?
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2019-06-19T14:36:16Z (over 5 years ago)
Original score: 2