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Q&A Can I use spoken English at some places over 'technically accurate English' in a general fiction?

Your narration can also be more casual -- it depends on the overall tone of the work, but the Narrator POV is sort of a character, too. Sometimes, if it's generally more formal, by using the cas...

posted 5y ago by April Salutes Monica C.‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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#2: Initial revision by (deleted user) · 2019-12-08T12:19:49Z (over 4 years ago)
Your narration can also be more casual -- it depends on the overall tone of the work, but the Narrator POV is sort of a character, too.

Sometimes, if it's generally more formal, by using the casual tone (if intended), it becomes clear that we're now closer to a protagonists' thoughts. This happens a lot in _Harry Potter_ -- sometimes the 3rd person POV narration is a little more angsty/teenage-ish -- that means we're basically in Harry's thoughts. When the narration is more British Story Teller, then the information is to be taken as more objectively true.

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