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Q&A Is it bad to suddenly introduce another element to your fantasy world a good ways into the story?

If (as you say here) the vampires despide and hunted down, then it may be possible (if it does not conflict with other parts) introduce them out of blue in something like this (yeah everyone knows ...

posted 5y ago by gilhad‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T12:22:14Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/a/46440
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#2: Initial revision by user avatar gilhad‭ · 2019-12-08T12:22:14Z (almost 5 years ago)
If (as you say here) the vampires despide and hunted down, then it may be possible (if it does not conflict with other parts) introduce them out of blue in something like this (yeah everyone knows about vampires, there just was not reason to show it, until now):

... and so I stopped the running boy and asked him "what it is all about?"

"Don't you know? They catched a vampire today! They say that he will be put in chains on the main square for all day long and then burned at evening!" he enthusiasticly waved his hands as if he catched the vampire itself.

"Finally some good news" I replied "I did not heard about such catch for so many months!"

"Yes, our Prince is realy a hero" agreed the boy "nobody is such good vampire hunter as he is. Heralds say, its his tenth vampire and that the show will be really big today!"

"I must be there for sure, cannot miss such great event" I told, but the boy was already running toward main square again ...

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2019-07-04T00:43:41Z (over 5 years ago)
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