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How do we handle pauses in a dialogue? Let's say that character A speaks and then after a pause character A speaks again. How should we separate the two moments, should we write two lines of dialo...
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T12:24:20Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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blackbird
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2019-12-08T12:24:20Z (almost 5 years ago)
How do we handle pauses in a dialogue? Let's say that character A speaks and then after a pause character A speaks again. How should we separate the two moments, should we write two lines of dialogues or should we cut the two lines of dialogues with a brief description? For example: > "Was the computer software hacked?" > > **"No, it was a bug caused by legacy software. Any other question?"** > > **"No? Ok, see you on Thursday."** > > "Bye" Bolded parts represent lines spoken by the same person.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2019-07-07T21:58:28Z (over 5 years ago)
Original score: 26