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Why don't you paraphrase the action? Say what he is literally doing. How does he give the chip? Is it in an envelope? Does he extend his arm? Is he tossing it? .... "Here's the chip in question...
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#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T12:25:52Z (over 4 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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infinitezero
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2019-12-08T12:25:52Z (over 4 years ago)
Why don't you paraphrase the action? Say what he is literally doing. How does he give the chip? Is it in an envelope? Does he extend his arm? Is he tossing it? .... > "Here's the chip in question" he said as he passed him the sealed envelope, making sure [Jack] had a firm grip on it before he let go. "It's a very old one, make sure you take care of it.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2019-07-12T06:04:49Z (almost 5 years ago)
Original score: 30