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If your goal is hectic momentum, then two-sentence paragraphs with a visual indicator of "scene change" might work. Colonel Mustard frantically wiped up the table. No one would believe he hadn...
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2019-12-13T12:00:48Z (over 4 years ago)
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#3: Attribution notice added
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2019-12-08T12:28:48Z (over 4 years ago)
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If your goal is hectic momentum, then two-sentence paragraphs with a visual indicator of "scene change" might work. > Colonel Mustard frantically wiped up the table. No one would believe he hadn't done it. > ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ > Miss Scarlett straightened her dress, patted her hair, and checked her makeup in her compact. She had to look impeccable or the detective would see right through her. > ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ > Detective Black charged up the stairs. If she was fast enough, she _might_ catch him in the act. > ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ > Colonel Mustard stuffed the towels in the laundry chute and threw the pipe out the window. He fussed with the curtains far too long. Someone was coming down the hall. > ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ > In the kitchen, the timer rang. And so on. It's a little obvious, but it might work.
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2019-07-18T09:56:46Z (almost 5 years ago)
Original score: 18