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I am writing a rather dark, grey fantasy story. It is supposed to feature a twist that turns the antagonist's goal to not to be evil at all (just misjudged) and really trivial (despite requiring la...
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T12:30:16Z (about 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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Kiratta
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2019-12-08T12:30:16Z (about 5 years ago)
I am writing a rather dark, grey fantasy story. It is supposed to feature a twist that turns the antagonist's goal to not to be evil at all (just misjudged) and really trivial (despite requiring large dose of effort). The protagonist changes for the worse, but I still get the feeling that that kind of twist will undermine the whole dark-ish feeling and readers' expectations. Would it work? Should I rework that idea?
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2019-07-21T11:09:00Z (over 5 years ago)
Original score: 10