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Q&A Sci-fi change: Too much or Not enough

Every reader comes at a work with a different perspective. One reader may not even notice the elements that are central for another. The only way to find out if your two beta readers were focusin...

posted 5y ago by Cyn‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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#4: Attribution notice removed by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-20T00:40:47Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T12:35:07Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision by (deleted user) · 2019-12-08T12:35:07Z (almost 5 years ago)
Every reader comes at a work with a different perspective. One reader may not even notice the elements that are central for another.

The only way to find out if your two beta readers were focusing on different things is to ask them. When a society changes fundamentally, especially when leading to dystopia, it will change multiple elements and all to different degrees.

Gender roles, employment protections, who rears children, the weight of the military in the society, prison systems, divides between rich and poor, racial disparity, education, safety of the air and water, the appearance of the night sky, how much nature is left (or has it taken over), and so much more.

Perhaps your first reader felt the ecological changes you were suggesting were too extreme and your second reader felt that the role of children in the society would change a lot more than you showed. But if they were both talking about, say, your portrayals of requirements for military service, then it's trickier to figure out.

More beta readers and more details from the ones you have are your solution.

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2019-07-28T23:43:29Z (over 5 years ago)
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