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Q&A Building a scene and readability

Each chapter will open on something that sets the scene to come. A descriptive paragraph (or other length) that focuses on the setting is a perfectly legitimate way to do this, but it's not requir...

posted 5y ago by Cyn‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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#2: Initial revision by (deleted user) · 2019-12-08T12:35:19Z (almost 5 years ago)
## Each chapter will open on something that sets the scene to come.

A descriptive paragraph (or other length) that focuses on the setting is a perfectly legitimate way to do this, but it's not required. You can also open with dialogue, or character thoughts, or an action, for example.

- If you have multiple POVs, you may wish to start each chapter with something that makes it obvious _which_ character's head the reader is in this time.

- If you have multiple settings, let the reader know _where_ they are physically.

- If you have more than one time stream (either because of actual time travel or due to flashbacks or historical scenes or stories within a story) make sure the reader knows _when_ they are.

Length of the chapter opening can vary depending on what you need. It can be pretty much nothing, just straight into it. It can be a sentence. Or it can be a few paragraphs (generally for a major change in setting and such).

- It's too short if the reader is confused.

- It's too long if the reader is bored and wants to get on with the story.

If you aren't sure if you've gotten these things right, ask your critique group or beta readers. You know where and when you are so having fresh eyes on it is important.

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2019-07-28T23:32:58Z (over 5 years ago)
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