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What's the proper way of indicating that a car has reached its destination during a dialogue? For example, two persons have a conversation, and they reach a destination, is there a standard way to ...
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System
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2019-12-08T12:37:11Z (over 4 years ago)
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blackbird
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2019-12-08T12:37:11Z (over 4 years ago)
What's the proper way of indicating that a car has reached its destination during a dialogue? For example, two persons have a conversation, and they reach a destination, is there a standard way to do this? For example: > ... > > "I am not sure if we should really talk about this, because you know, it's a real pain in the ass to talk about personal issues, you know." > > "Yeah, it might be true. Let's not talk about this anymore" he said as he looked out the window of the car and saw the headquarter rapidly approaching. "We've reached our destination." > > "Already?" > > "It has been an hour." > > "Jeez, time can fly." I am not sure why, but revealing it in the dialog tag sounds really weird, is there a better way to do this properly?
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System
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2019-08-03T03:28:29Z (over 4 years ago)
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