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Q&A Don't look at what I did there

These are scene jumps that serve the plot It's unclear what you mean by this; you can make a scene jump without leaving obvious questions unresolved. If you never resolve them, readers are goi...

posted 5y ago by BradC‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T12:50:44Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision by user avatar BradC‭ · 2019-12-08T12:50:44Z (almost 5 years ago)
> These are scene jumps that serve the plot

It's unclear what you mean by this; you can make a scene jump without leaving obvious questions unresolved. If you _never_ resolve them, readers are going to see them as flaws.

As you say, hiding things based on POV can absolutely work:

- _Charlie_ has no idea how Bob found his home. From his perspective, shock and confusion are the appropriate response. 

- _Mary's captor's_ don't notice that she has somehow escaped her bonds, until she is long gone. Or perhaps _Mary's partner, Sally_ gets an abbreviated story (or just a casual joke) from Mary about how she got away.

If Mary is your POV, though, it is going to seem really strange not to at least _hint_ at something (that Mary was once a magician's assistant, that she wore a metal bracelet with an edge sharp enough to cut through rope, that she was able to befriend the sharp-toothed guard dog, etc.).

You can also leave the reader satisfied by resolving these later, like in a mystery. Maybe we discover Bob's background as a hacker, or his friendship with the chatboard owner, or his association with law enforcement.

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2019-08-29T16:28:56Z (about 5 years ago)
Original score: 3