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Try choosing something that reflects the attitude of the narrative voice and establish a difference as soon as it's needed. For example: Slutty Susan took a long vape hit and Susi queen bee just r...
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#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T12:51:19Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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JJ Novaczech
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2019-12-08T12:51:19Z (almost 5 years ago)
Try choosing something that reflects the attitude of the narrative voice and establish a difference as soon as it's needed. For example: Slutty Susan took a long vape hit and Susi queen bee just rolled her eyes and shut the door. From then on, Susi-q kept the upper hand.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2019-08-30T15:30:54Z (about 5 years ago)
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