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Q&A How do we end a description properly?

If this character is unimportant to the story presumably the other character in the scene is more important, focus more on them. It seemed to her she would not be able to coax anything else o...

posted 5y ago by BKlassen‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T12:52:36Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/a/47801
License name: CC BY-SA 3.0
License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision by user avatar BKlassen‭ · 2019-12-08T12:52:36Z (almost 5 years ago)
If this character is unimportant to the story presumably the other character in the scene is more important, focus more on them.

> It seemed to her she would not be able to coax anything else out of him as he waved her goodbye and took a sip from his coffee. As the elevator doors closed she saw him smile and was glad for the words of wisdom he had given her.

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2019-09-03T15:58:57Z (about 5 years ago)
Original score: 1