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I would have written it as... Character A defeats Character B Character B is so humiliated he tries suicide but Character A saves him by sacrificing himself and is very badly hurt so he has tem...
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#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T12:58:32Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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Novice
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2019-12-08T12:58:32Z (almost 5 years ago)
I would have written it as... 1. Character A defeats Character B 2. Character B is so humiliated he tries suicide but 3. Character A saves him by sacrificing himself and is very badly hurt so he has temporary amnesia 4. Character B gets his lesson and changes for the better and 5. at the end he is taking care of Character A, whom he accepted as a brother and a friend...
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2019-09-18T15:43:45Z (about 5 years ago)
Original score: 0