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Q&A How to convey the anatomy of a humanoid race?

I am writing a extra-terrestrial high fantasy novel. The story is completely set in an alien world. No visits from Earth and no visits to Earth. My characters are humanoids, who look like elves...

4 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Sangeetha‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by DPT‭

#4: Question reopened by user avatar Monica Cellio‭ · 2020-02-09T21:51:21Z (almost 5 years ago)
#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T13:01:23Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/48164
License name: CC BY-SA 4.0
License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0/
#2: Initial revision by user avatar Sangeetha‭ · 2019-12-08T13:01:23Z (almost 5 years ago)
I am writing a extra-terrestrial high fantasy novel. The story is completely set in an alien world. No visits from Earth and no visits to Earth.

My characters are humanoids, who look like elves, but with different skin, eye, and hair colours. They lay eggs rather than give birth to children.

How can I prevent my readers from misunderstanding my race to be bird-like creatures?

I would like to avoid a boring introduction paragraph. The story is in third person view.

In the stories I read about egg laying humanoids, the main character is from Earth. So they can easily compare the humanoid race to humans and can give the reader a better picture.

But in my story, all the characters belong to the same race. So when one character sees another, describing the basic structure seem a bit odd.

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2019-09-24T12:16:43Z (about 5 years ago)
Original score: 1