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Q&A Letting a (secondary) antagonist leave mid story - Should it be avoided?

I have a powerful antagonist perform important functions within my story. At the midpoint, he just leaves. Several Plot developments depend on this character. I tried replacing him with other char...

4 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by celtschk‭

#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T13:06:11Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/48401
License name: CC BY-SA 4.0
License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0/
#2: Initial revision by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T13:06:11Z (almost 5 years ago)
I have a powerful antagonist perform important functions within my story. At the midpoint, he just leaves. Several Plot developments depend on this character.

I tried replacing him with other character(s) or causes within my world, but I am getting into extremly convoluted territory with it and I am really uneasy and not satisfied with those solutions.

There is still a main antagonist and another secondary antagonist in the story, so conflict is not the issue.

**Do you think letting a major player leave mid-story should be avoided at all costs?**

**Is there a way to mitigate potential maleffects?**

NOTE: We witness his departure by ship mid story from the point of view of another character.

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2019-10-05T23:52:10Z (about 5 years ago)
Original score: 1