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I put work into making up my own names for spells. However, I feel like they come across as childish when I read over my writing This was also my impression when re-reading Harry Potter. It really...
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System
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2019-12-08T13:09:13Z (almost 5 years ago)
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klippy
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2019-12-08T13:09:13Z (almost 5 years ago)
I put work into making up my own names for spells. However, I feel like they come across as childish when I read over my writing This was also my impression when re-reading Harry Potter. It really took me out of it when adult characters were shouting these childish, made-up words. But then again, some of the spells used do work and are actually quite iconic (exp. Avada Kedavra)
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System
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2019-10-16T09:16:16Z (about 5 years ago)
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