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It depends on who said "Move!". If it is the person sidestepping, then no. But then you should have written "Move!" I said, and immediately sidestepped him. if the person sidestepping is respondin...
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2019-12-19T22:13:57Z (over 4 years ago)
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#3: Attribution notice added
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2019-12-08T13:10:28Z (over 4 years ago)
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It depends on who said "Move!". If it is the person sidestepping, then no. But then you should have written "Move!" I said, and immediately sidestepped him. if the person sidestepping is responding to somebody else that said "Move!", which appears to be the case here, then YES, you need a new paragraph. It is fine to combine a single character's speech and action on the same line if they occur close in time, either simultaneously or sequentially. But not one character's speech and **_another_** character's actions.
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2019-10-23T16:29:03Z (over 4 years ago)
Original score: 8