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I will cheerfully use "singular they" if that is a particular person's pronoun, but not as a lazy substitute for "he/she." Rewrite the sentence, either as plural or as second-person. 1) When us...
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I will cheerfully use *singular they* if that is a particular person's pronoun, but not as a lazy substitute for "he/she."- Rewrite the sentence, either as plural or as second-person.
- >1) When **users request** for their visit and order to be registered in their account, a checkin is created at POS.
- >2) When **you request** for **your** visit and order to be registered in **your** account, a checkin is created at POS.
- I will cheerfully use "singular they" if that is a particular person's pronoun, but not as a lazy substitute for "he/she."
- Rewrite the sentence, either as plural or as second-person.
- >1) When **users request** for their visit and order to be registered in their account, a checkin is created at POS.
- >2) When **you request** for **your** visit and order to be registered in **your** account, a checkin is created at POS.
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I will cheerfully use *singular they* if that is a particular person's pronoun, but not as a lazy substitute for "he/she." Rewrite the sentence, either as plural or as second-person. >1) When **users request** for their visit and order to be registered in their account, a checkin is created at POS. >2) When **you request** for **your** visit and order to be registered in **your** account, a checkin is created at POS.