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Recently, a few snippets of my fiction have received critiques along the lines of 'Does not give a sense of space'. Or 'needs more description, sights and sounds'. I think where I am going wrong ...
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T01:50:49Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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M.A
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2019-12-08T01:50:49Z (almost 5 years ago)
Recently, a few snippets of my fiction have received critiques along the lines of 'Does not give a sense of space'. Or 'needs more description, sights and sounds'. I think where I am going wrong is that in any given scene I am focusing too hard on the characters, the dialogue or the progression of events and not creating a world which the reader can feel around him/her. So would you guys have any tips on how I can get better at creating space? Any good reading material on it?
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2011-08-17T06:34:58Z (about 13 years ago)
Original score: 14