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Is "the easiest way to earn rewards online at the click of a button" a tag phrase you have to use? It seems a bit awkwardly worded to me. How about "the easiest way to earn rewards online at the ...
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#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T01:54:20Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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Larry Smithmier
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2019-12-08T01:54:20Z (almost 5 years ago)
Is "the easiest way to earn rewards online at the click of a button" a tag phrase you have to use? It seems a bit awkwardly worded to me. How about "the easiest way to earn rewards online at the click of a button" I would change "Hit up our link sharing section instead." to "Hit up **Visit** our link sharing section instead." Also, "you can chance your points in our weekly lottery to possibly" might sound better as: "you can chance **exchange** your points **for entries** in our weekly lottery to possibly" I like #2 better, but a lot depends on the timing of your background video.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2011-09-05T21:42:16Z (about 13 years ago)
Original score: 3