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Here's where I think you're going wrong. You say: Since there is no tension in the plot (as it is a comedy book), the plot soon loses focus. Why would a comedic novel not require tension? Eve...
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System
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2019-12-08T01:54:29Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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Lynn Beighley
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2019-12-08T01:54:29Z (almost 5 years ago)
Here's where I think you're going wrong. You say: > Since there is no tension in the plot (as it is a comedy book), the plot soon loses focus. Why would a comedic novel not require tension? Every novel needs tension. There must be a reason that the hero goes to place A and place B, something driving him, something urgent and important or scary or wonderful. (Remember the movie Galaxy Quest? Funny, and with a strong plot.) I recommend you locate comedic novels and read them to see how the humorous tone of the novel can work with a strong plot. I don't see any reason why you should limit yourself to reading only comedic fantasy novels. Also, I think the best comedic novels aren't made up of one funny event after another. A little pathos thrown in, something heavy and serious to provide a contrast to the humor is often a good idea.
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System
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2011-09-06T15:49:18Z (about 13 years ago)
Original score: 6