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I'm documenting a block of computer code and would like to make it clear and concise. I'm describing a function that populates a field on a user input screen. Here's my best shot but it still seems...
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T01:54:35Z (over 4 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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zundarz
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2019-12-08T01:54:35Z (over 4 years ago)
I'm documenting a block of computer code and would like to make it clear and concise. I'm describing a function that populates a field on a user input screen. Here's my best shot but it still seems confusing because the 'in the', 'on the', 'for a' seem like a lot of prepositions for one sentence.
This function returns the WINGNUT_SELLER_CODE that appears in the 'Vendor' field
on the 'THREADED_NUTS' screen for a given NUT_ID.
Questions:
[1] How can I rewrite this to make it easier to understand?
[2] What about 'that appears' vs. 'which appears' when should I use 'that' and 'which' ?
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2011-09-06T16:28:42Z (over 12 years ago)
Original score: 1