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Q&A How to give the readers breathing space, without putting them to sleep?

I remember reading somewhere that while plots should have tension, too much tension will tire the readers out, so there should be some breathing place, where the reader can get a chance to catch th...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Shantnu Tiwari‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T01:54:52Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/3874
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#2: Initial revision by user avatar Shantnu Tiwari‭ · 2019-12-08T01:54:52Z (almost 5 years ago)
I remember reading somewhere that while plots should have tension, too much tension will tire the readers out, so there should be some breathing place, where the reader can get a chance to catch their breath.

Unfortunately, in one or two books I read recently, right after a tense scene, the authors started talking about something trivial, like psycho-analysing the hero's childhood, or the mid life crisis of a middle aged superhero. This bored me and I threw the books away.

While I understand that a breathing space is needed, how do I ensure that this breathing space doesn't turn into "bore" space?

Edit: The examples I gave are from action/thriller books, where all the psycho-analysing and "characterisation" really felt out of place. I understand these scenes may have been appropriate in a literary novel.

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2011-09-08T20:58:43Z (about 13 years ago)
Original score: 7