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I'm rewriting a technical book that will list two authors: the original author and me. Much of the text has been changed and there are some informal parts where reader is addressed in first person:...
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T01:58:49Z (over 4 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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Marcus Booster
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2019-12-08T01:58:49Z (over 4 years ago)
I'm rewriting a technical book that will list two authors: the original author and me. Much of the text has been changed and there are some informal parts where reader is addressed in first person: "_I_ want to show you ...". I'm wondering if this should this read: "_We_ want to show you ..."? Personally, I think that "we" sounds weird (and distracting) because the book has been written on two separate occasions. For the most part I'm trying to eliminate these references, but there are a few times where it would be more trouble to do that.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2011-10-05T14:03:15Z (over 12 years ago)
Original score: 6