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First off, unless "Mindblade" is a use-name he took or was given because he has some kind of esper abilities, give him a last name that doesn't sound like it was lifted from Shadowrun. Second, if ...
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2019-12-13T12:00:00Z (about 5 years ago)
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#3: Attribution notice added
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2019-12-08T01:58:57Z (about 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
First off, unless "Mindblade" is a use-name he took or was given because he has some kind of esper abilities, give him a last name that doesn't sound like it was lifted from _Shadowrun_. Second, if you want him not to be a superman, give him some physical challenge he has to struggle with on an daily or even hourly basis. Give him a bad leg. A club foot. Terrible scars. One eye. What the hell, give him three eyes, just to be different. GRRMartin is doing awesome things with a dwarf these days.
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2011-10-07T00:17:13Z (about 13 years ago)
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