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Q&A Attributives in dialogue

They're fine; they certainly aren't an error. If a particular use sounds awkward, don't hesitate to drop attribution entirely (it's often still quite clear who's talking, because most conversations...

posted 12y ago by Standback‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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#4: Attribution notice removed by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-12T20:05:59Z (over 4 years ago)
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#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T02:08:07Z (over 4 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision by (deleted user) · 2019-12-08T02:08:07Z (over 4 years ago)
They're fine; they certainly aren't an error. If a particular use sounds awkward, don't hesitate to drop attribution entirely (it's often still quite clear who's talking, because most conversations are dialogue, so it's whoever wasn't talking the previous paragraph), or to move the attribution up to earlier in the line:

> "But why would any of all that," he said, "explain how late you were to the party?"

This removes the incongruous sense of using "said" for a question, because it puts distance between the attributive and the question mark.

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2012-01-03T18:08:24Z (over 12 years ago)
Original score: -1