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Q&A Regarding Professional Report [closed]

I am new in the working world and I happen to be given a lot of tasks related with creating report. Later on I heard people give me comments that my sentence structure and my word choices are not ...

0 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by rofans91‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T02:08:17Z (over 4 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision by user avatar rofans91‭ · 2019-12-08T02:08:17Z (over 4 years ago)
I am new in the working world and I happen to be given a lot of tasks related with creating report.

Later on I heard people give me comments that my sentence structure and my word choices are not professional enough (in a corporate world).

I start to think that I need to improve this. Can anyone suggest/advice me tips on how to be professional in writing? If you have some websites to recommend, it will be nice too.

Several mistakes that I am usually critized:

1. Word choices are too simple and not specific
2. Lengthy and shorty sentences
3. Usage of first person in the sentence
4. I don't utilize several strong ms word features that actually ease report making, can someone suggest me on this?
#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2012-01-06T10:09:58Z (over 12 years ago)
Original score: 1