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You have to be the careful type. I am annoyed with the repetition of something in your excerpt. "She wanted to fall asleep and sleep but she couldn’t sleep because she couldn’t fall asleep even t...
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#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T02:09:41Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/a/23689 License name: CC BY-SA 3.0 License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision
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Adit Kirtani
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2019-12-08T02:09:41Z (almost 5 years ago)
You have to be the careful type. I am annoyed with the repetition of something in your excerpt. _"She wanted to fall asleep and sleep but she couldn’t sleep because she couldn’t fall asleep even though she was very tired. "_ This was **very annoying** as you have to wrap mind around it. **_But, I_** think you should go for idea, nice to try it and see respone from website like this.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2016-07-05T13:01:42Z (over 8 years ago)
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